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Don't Cry... by Bri-sta Don't Cry... by Bri-sta
Large purple eyes shone up at her before the tiny face that held them pressed into her flank. "Why are you crying, princess?"
"Oh you sweet foal, you should be in bed." Celestia said softly, laying down on the cold flagstone floor so that she might hold the unicorn to her. Twilight instinctively went to her, pressing her head against her mentors neck in an effort to comfort the crying mare.
"I-I don't want you to cry."
"I'm just lonely, Twilight. But I feel better with you here." She confided. Celestia buried her face in Twilights soft fur and gave a relieved sigh, happy the little foal had been feeling adventurous.
A small tongue touched her cheek and she opened her eyes to find Twilight licking at her tears the way she often had for her. Her faithful little student...

Just a little story i had jumping around in my brain. I suck at them but it wanted out so here. Celestia is surprised by her student one night while gazing at her sisters moon.
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AmazingQuotes4Friend Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
TheWillfulWanderer Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
These Celestia & Foal!Twilight drawrings are a beautiful set of pencilsketches, I just wanted you to know. And that's including depiction and meaning as well as appearance.
Kitet-Dromza Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
How sweet :)
ApertureIndigo Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Student
WillisNinety-Six Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist
Awww :)
WhiteWing1 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Student General Artist
madman12000 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Awwww, sad and cute... and we know it turns out okay because once she was legal Celestia and her went at it like rabbits on magical Viagra!
Doculean Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Too late, I cried.(seriously) I really need to stop procrastinating and check up on yer gallery. I noticed this from another site. I just had to say something. It's just the most adorable, heartsploding thing I have seen in a very long time. I really hope this gets colored too. It will adorn my desktop or glasspad. (mousepad of glass) For a very very very long time. Yer Twi and Celly pics just never cease to amaze me. I have said it before, and I will say it again. You, without a doubt, do the best Twilight and Celestia pics, HOOVESDOWN! Irionic I found you based on a pic I would not normally look at, yet I now eagerly await new pics. ( how ironic as I have been neglecting to check da's submissions in my watch lists for a while now ) I have shown a few of my brony friends and a couple of my friends here at DA and they so far have did nothing but die from the adorable overload. This is like a nuclear bomb of adorableness, an... an, AN ADORABOMB! Pls pls pls, keep up the fantastic work!
dancinninjac Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
*sniff* It's so sad.
glittering-pony Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012

But I love it.
JosephRaszagal Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012

This is seriously one of the most toughing pony pics I've ever seen.
VelcroHeart Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Can you imagine tiny Twi trying to consolingly cradle Celestia's head? (While avoiding ending up dropping/under it!)
RunningWolf13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Sparksman Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
ach... :heart:
screams for an colored version, doesn't it? :shrug:
(and, if done by you pls. use those fluffy brushes again, really like them... ;) )
Apache111 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness.
Man, this is cute beyond ... EVERYTHING!
A really well done to you!
Deviant-ZAngel Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! :heart:
QuercusRobur Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Cute short little story and baby Twi is awesome.

Celestia really needs more love from us too.
WingZero032 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
loopuleasa Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man, this is awesome.
Sevireth Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Babby Twi is getting smaller and smaller! Soon she will evaporate into thin air! D:
That, or become a tiny poniblob and roll under the coach forever.
Lexvstee Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
so very very cute! love it, please write that story, would be so good for the simple fact that you can bolster it with all these wonderful sketches :D
Lawn-Pygmy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
I... Hmm.

If you're willing, perhaps I could write a short for you? It need only be for your eyes, of course, and would be shared at your discretion. But a scene like this gives me so many lovely ideas for writing that it is difficult to pass them up.

Would you allow me the honor? And perhaps a prompt?
Bri-sta Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
I'd be more than honored if you wrote something inspired for this picture. I don't mind who sees it, just be sure to let me see it too :3
Lawn-Pygmy Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Was there a specific story you had in mind that you'd like to see written? Or should I just go nuts?

'Cause my brain keeps wanting to tie it into Secret Tub Fun, but I also want to keep it more general in setting, and I'd also like to hear what you would like. Kinda hard to do all of those at once.

So, what would you like?
Bri-sta Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
You write what comes to mind. I always find it more interesting to read what comes from others than what I suggest to them. I'm sure it will be interesting :3
Lawn-Pygmy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
*strokes chin* Hmmm... Perhaps something set right after the events of 'STF 7 - Diary', or maybe...

I'll let you know what I come up with!
Doculean Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
I am excited about this prospect aswell. I have been admiring these pics since I first found them. I have been interested in writing something, but my writing skills are pretty bad at best ( from what I am gathering ). I did a "What If" thing for Past Sins, but I never got a response back from the author. (Spoiler, Twi confronts Celly and things get hairy, but all ends well.) I promised I would not post it unless otherwise. But I may post the endish part with Twi and Nyx. meh. I am just soo bad a writing tho... *laughs*
Lawn-Pygmy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Well, the best way to get better at it is to do it. If you need a good example, all you have to do is look at STF. The first one was nowhere near as good as the last, nor the one I'm working on now.

Just keep writing, and have someone proofread. I cannot stress enough the importance of a good proofreader. Get two! Not just someone who'll go 'yeah this is awesome!' but someone who'll point you straight.

You should go back and edit your thing, maybe, and try again with that author.
Lawn-Pygmy Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Can do!

I make no guarantees as to its length, but I will endeavor to make it sweet.
ScyStorm Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nnnnnggggg! <3 I love it so much!
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